Potshot… potshot… CLUSTERBOMB!

21 Oct

You snapped my finger
But it’s ok
Gave up piano when I was young

You punctured my lung
But I’ll be fine
I’ve got a spare in here somewhere

You broke my heart
I had just one
And now I’m gonna break yours…

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8 Responses to “Potshot… potshot… CLUSTERBOMB!”

  1. Poet Rummager January 15, 2016 at 12:55 am #

    Raw with a vengeance! Love this.

    • BRH January 15, 2016 at 8:47 am #

      Thanks – you should have seen the first draft and original title!

      • Poet Rummager January 15, 2016 at 8:49 am #

        Haha! What was the original title?

      • BRH January 15, 2016 at 8:54 am #

        Replace the bomb in clusterbomb with another 4-letter word sometimes preceded with ‘cluster’.

      • Poet Rummager January 15, 2016 at 8:57 am #

        Clusterfuck! How funny — why’d you change such a beautiful title?!

      • BRH January 15, 2016 at 8:58 am #

        Catholic guilt!

      • Poet Rummager January 15, 2016 at 9:01 am #

        What?! You, too? Have we talked about Catholic guilt before??

      • BRH January 15, 2016 at 10:48 am #

        I don’t think so. We should though!

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