Speechless

29 Apr

For day 28 of napowrimo – a backwards poem

Walk away
Tired now of waiting, you
As no words still are formed
The seconds feel like hours
Turned to stone
Uncharacteristically, I’m
Always with the quick response
Normally verbose
Paralysed me
The words that you just uttered
As if a magic spell

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8 Responses to “Speechless”

  1. paula graham April 29, 2016 at 8:19 am #

    Not an easy relationship by the sound of things..Amazing , how you find all these words!! and fit them together so well, time and time again.

    • BRH April 29, 2016 at 10:57 am #

      You’re very kind Paula – thank you!

  2. Crow April 29, 2016 at 8:23 pm #

    That’s excellent. I read it forwards and backwards to get the full effect. Very well done.

    • BRH April 29, 2016 at 8:46 pm #

      Thank you!

  3. Karina Pinella April 29, 2016 at 10:50 pm #

    Impressive. You must have worn your shirt backward when you wrote this.

    • BRH April 30, 2016 at 11:23 am #

      Thank KP!

  4. Poet Rummager April 30, 2016 at 7:52 am #

    I was waiting for Medusa to make an appearance, and then realized, you turned into stone, cuz love held you spellbound. Awww! ❤

    • BRH April 30, 2016 at 11:23 am #

      *blushes*

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