The crow made me do it!

15 Responses to “Car Park Blues – Open Mic”

Poet Rummager May 1, 2016 at 10:32 am #

Ah, I can listen to your voice until the cows, er, sheep come home 😀 Such rhythm in your Car Park Blues poem! And three wives, you don’t say?! 😉 ❤

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- BRH May 2, 2016 at 8:53 am #
  
  Thank you! There may be one or two small factual inaccuracies in this poem. I’ve had 6 wives – like all British men.
  
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  - Poet Rummager May 2, 2016 at 8:24 pm #
    
    My goodness! And room for the mistresses, I hope 😉
paula graham May 1, 2016 at 11:07 am #

Car park blues…what a great thing to listen to, Brilliant. I like the title and how well you know to tell mankind nOt to do something…You can be sure they will!! I did , anyway.

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- BRH May 2, 2016 at 8:50 am #
  
  Thanks Paula. People are rebellious and I like that!
  
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Karina Pinella May 1, 2016 at 7:19 pm #

Fine reading, very well done, not a single hum, hem, or haw. Straight talk from the B. Great lines!

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- BRH May 2, 2016 at 8:49 am #
  
  Thanks KP. I didn’t post the 3 billion previous takes with all the hems, hees, haws, and heehaws in.
  
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  - Karina Pinella May 2, 2016 at 11:03 am #
    
    You probably had one that was just a laugh track, right?
  - BRH May 2, 2016 at 11:05 am #
    
    I should have used a laugh track! Next time maybe…
Crow May 2, 2016 at 2:24 am #

My friend, this is awesome. Do you mind if I link to it?

I’m going to set up an actual Open Mic page on my site when I unstick the sticky post. Isn’t that from Shakespeare? I had a more important question in there somewhere. Thanks for stepping up to the mic.

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- BRH May 2, 2016 at 8:47 am #
  
  Thank you. It was a bit of a toe-in-the-water thing, but yeah I’m happy for you to link to it.
  
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- BRH May 2, 2016 at 8:48 am #
  
  And now I’ll never be able to look at a sticky post again without laughing! Thank you!
  
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whowanderarelost June 26, 2016 at 11:41 pm #

Nice

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- BRH June 30, 2016 at 2:25 pm #
  
  Thanks
  
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